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2014.05.21 01:17

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교정 받기 전:

It is sunny day but the temperature is not so warm since winter is coming.

I realized one thing during lunch time today. What my realization was if I say something to people, many of them become true. No matter good thing or bad thing.

So far, I’m not so much regret it but If I thought what I want to be, then, it would be better thing for my life.


교정 받은 후:

It is sunny day but the temperature is not so warm since winter is coming.

I realized one thing during lunch time today.

I realized that when I say something to people either good or bad they become true.

So far I don`t regret much about it but if my thoughts will tell me what I want to be then it would be a better thing for my life.